Friday, April 5, 2019

Week 11 Story: The Boy Who Became a Sheep and That's It

A photograph of the Navajo churro, the sheep that the Navajo tribe believe to be sacred.

The Tolchini, a clan of the Navajo, lived at Wind Mountains. They moved west after the young brother kept bring back food and pine boughs without rhyme or reason and the other brothers questioned his own sanity. After moving, since they had only been eating seed and grass to survive, the eldest brothers suggested that they go hunting to find food for themselves to be able to thrive and prosper instead scavenging for grass. They suggested that the youngest brother stay behind while they continued onward. After five days of no communication from his brothers, the youngest one set out on his own to find them. He camped at various caves and survived off of the land until he came across a large group of crows, that eventually morphed into Crow People that began speaking to the youngest brother in harsh whispers that terrified him. After overcoming the initial shock, he began listening to the voices and they told him about what had occurred with his brothers. They had become lost and killed 12 deer in their journey and they began telling the young brother where to go to find his family. After much walking and following their guidance, he found his brothers and told them of what the Crow People had told him. The details of their trip so closely matched the brother's retelling, that they realized that the brother had been very blessed and not gone crazy. In that moment, four ancient Gods appeared in the form of sheep and turned the young brother into a sheep much like them; however, the young brother felt no different, his form had merely just been altered. In a flash, the gods disappeared and the young brother was left in his form, a symbol of the sacred gods in Navajo culture, but no different from any other sheep. 

Author's Note: I started with the traditional Navajo story of the young boy who became a God in the form of a sheep after rescuing his brothers. I had a funny thought while reading this story that was essentially just "What if nothing else happened?" He would just be a sheep without godly powers or knowledge that improve the lives of people.

Bibliography: Judson's "Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest." http://mythfolklore.blogspot.com/2014/03/myth-folklore-unit-california-and-old.html

6 comments:

  1. Hey Chase,

    Very interesting thought that nothing else happens. I wouldn't have thought of that twist. You retold the story really well, but I would go back through and look for some grammatical errors. I also think it would really add to your story if you included dialogue. I did like how you kept it short and sweet. You got right to the point which can be very hard.

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  2. Hey, Chase!

    I'm a big fan. I was very confused at the end until I read your author's note, after which I was very amused. The ancient gods had changed the youngest brother's life forever, but the youngest brother did absolutely nothing to deserve or prompt the transformation. There are some grammatical errors in your story that could be easily fixed by reading it aloud to yourself.

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  3. Hello, Chase!

    You did an incredible job with this story! I am going to go ahead that I am unfamiliar with Navajo churros, but I am a fan. I am a little confused about how/when the young brother was turned into a sheep. Did the gods do it in front of the other brothers? Aside from that, I appreciate your comical take on the story!

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  4. Chase,

    I love your version of this story. The story seemed choppy, as I'm sure the source material was just the same. I'm not super well-versed with Native writings and stories, but your version of it makes me want to read more into it. I especially liked how they acknowledge the whole "oh, he's just tripping" factor and said that he was actually truly blessed by the gods.

    Great job!

    -Lance J.

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  5. Hi Chase,
    It is precisely these random questions that pop up in your mind that allows for these unique stories. I like how normal the ending is, nothing crazy. Why a sheep though? Does this animal mean something to the Navajo? In addition, I wonder if you can space out your story more or add dialogue in it to make it even more engaging. Keep up with the good work!

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  6. Hey Chase!

    Your version of this story is hilarious. While reading, you can feel something extraordinary is about to happen. Then, at the climax of the story, you pull the mat out from under the reader by ending with the absurd, and somewhat confusing, mental image of four sheep gods appearing, turning a young boy into a normal sheep, then leaving. You throw the typical folklore model on its head and I rather liked it. Great story!

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